Mangaras page 09 - redid text

For those just joining. This is page 9 of a story that has split into 2 now kind of the opposite of what's happening with the characters lol.

Never really been good at the whole  putting thoughts into words so sorry if the story is lame, but I'm basically just going with what needs to be explained for some of these images.

I love stories but I have to express them though visuals because it never comes out right when I type it. >_<